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Poetry | October 2011

Mizuko Jizo

By Terri Kirby Erickson

On the days she makes amends,
a mother kneels beside her Mizuko Jizo.
There are thousands like it in the temple
at Kamakura, effigies of lost
children–miscarried, stillborn, aborted–
and parents who come there to care

for them. She pours water over the statue
to quench her child’s thirst, ties
a sweater around its shoulders to warm
the stone. It takes many hours
to knit these garments when the needles
tremble in your hands,

and your heart feels like a skein of yarn,
unraveling. She prays for safe passage
for the baby’s spirit, speaks a name that only
she among the living knows.
Then she rises like a wisp of smoke–
walks away alone.

7 replies on “Mizuko Jizo”

Claudine Moreausays:
October 3, 2011 at 8:51 am

Terri,

As you know, for years I wondered what the symbolism was of these knitted red scarves,hats,and coats that I saw in Japan while I visited there in 2001. It was a joy to finally discover their meaning in meeting you and reading this work. Great poem!Powerful poem!

~Claudine

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Rosalyn Marhattasays:
October 3, 2011 at 9:33 am

Very beautiful. It really flows and shows me wonderful pictures.

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Angiesays:
October 3, 2011 at 10:15 am

This poem is so beautiful, so exquisitely captures the pain and need to nurture the one gone. Mizuko jizo is such an important figure for me since my loss, and I appreciate you sharing this piece with me. Thank you. xo

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Jessicasays:
October 3, 2011 at 4:24 pm

Captures perfectly our need to take care of our children even after they are gone. Thanks for sharing. Beautiful.

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Celisa Steelesays:
October 3, 2011 at 4:46 pm

The poem itself, its lines feel somehow Japanese. The heart as an unraveling skein of yarn is a great image–and so apt in this poem.

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Hannahsays:
October 3, 2011 at 5:03 pm

Beautiful. Thanks you so much.

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silagra achetersays:
December 27, 2011 at 10:45 am

thank you for helpful tips and simply good info

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