
Hoarder
You say
You want to be
Unearthed, unshelled,
Reborn.
But I watch you
Burrow ever deeper
In your putrid nest of things, things, things
You keep
Because they once pleased
Or reminded you
Or might, you thought,
Be useful—
Someday.
But I don’t believe,
Mother,
That you will build that clean new house.
Or that you’ll ever move there.
I think past and future
Are yolks
Of one egg.
I think
You are feathering
Your tomb.
6 replies on “Hoarder”
Exquisite analogy. So true and so sad.
Succinct, like the borders of the hoarder nest devoid of future freedom. Well done.
It takes the reader into your pain, your plea. and knowledge that there is no solution, just observation of more pain.
This is so moving. I relate.
All too common. Thanks for articulating this.
folds love and mourning into a wonderful unblinking metaphor, lingering like dust in sunlight. Haunting.