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Poetry | November/December 2023

I notice perhaps a small dot at bedtime

By Elizabeth Kandall

His eyelash line  
a bit darker in shadow, 
it is hard to tell, and it 
is bedtime, so let him 
sleep, I think, but in morning 
light, I see it is a tick. 
All summer, fighting them 
at every diaper change
and bath, and now, 
I say, hold still, sweetie, 
close your eyes, take 
my sterile tweezer precise 
to the edge of its bite 
and pinch. My little boy 
blinks, his clear brown eyes
say, you are good at that.

4 replies on “I notice perhaps a small dot at bedtime”

Jane Grobartsays:
November 15, 2023 at 9:51 pm

wonderful! truthful. and endearing.love, jane

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Amy Wynnesays:
November 16, 2023 at 9:50 am

Visceral and tender. Love this.

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Karen Trindlesays:
November 18, 2023 at 10:04 am

Perfection

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Hattie Myerssays:
November 20, 2023 at 9:48 pm

Exquisite.

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